Monday, 28 November 2016

OUIL501- Refining my essay

I have been looking st refining my essay. I think the essay is a bit confused in some ways at the minute, I think I'm trying to get too many ideas into an essay that isn't long enough to discuss them all. I need to start to think about refining the essay down, and eliminating Andy of the subjects that don't directly relate to the title or won't help with influencing my practical work.

I want to find the balance between discusssing social media and news, and talk about the differences between the two. Maybe a short discription of these at the start of the essay will help to outline the ideas efficiently?

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